StevRayBro's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potato]

Overall the style is constiant and you can tell you're learning the program. You've a good design sense and it looks like you know how to tell a story. But I would wait intill you're ready to tell a story with more debt. I see a promising start here.

onlyDistort responds:

Thanks for the positive response, I will keep on trying to make a story with more depth, I find animation very enjoyable so I won't be stopping any time soon.

[Pokefarts]

I should've read the title, but I just kind of saw a Pikachu, and thought, "Hey, I'll watch that".

I looked at your page, your other videos are drawn well and have relateable humor and comedic timing. I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a joke on the fact that it looks like this website likes really dumb videos... but I don't think it worked.

If I am reviewing this legitly, I would say what's already been said. The animation was decent, but mostly tweens... and staying on a limited animated shot for over 10 seconds is a page from Family Guy's "Book of UnFunny Jokes". The music was great and well used.

Sorry man, I know you can do better.

Lambtaco responds:

I guess I should let the cat out of the bag. I was feeling nostalgic about Newgrounds of old, and how the portal was flooded with crap, so I decided to make the worst movie I could think of. I spent like 3 hours on this. I was going to do some more crappy flashes, but then I got bored.